I like to study English very much. I like talk and write English, too. So I entered Kumamoto Gakuen University. I introduce my track how I studied English. And I will do my best in the future. I have my goal to study English, so I entered KGU.
I introduce my past. I have been studying English when I was six years old. I haunted English conversation school about six years. I haunted every Monday. I learn about talking, writing or speaking. It was so fun. I can make a lot of foreign friends. English conversation school teacher was Japanese but, foreign teachers sometime came there to teach English. When foreign teachers came there, students looked forward to coming them. I looked forward to coming them too. I like Japanese teacher, but foreign teachers tell us American culture. I was interested in them and like to talk foreign. When I was junior high school student, I studied hard very much. My weak point was grammar. So I remembered grammar with all my might. I was good at listening. So I could pass the test. I was very happy.
I try to write my blog every day. I was so busy because of Takuma Gakuen Festival’s preparation. I had to stay school at 10 o’clock every day. So I could write my blog completely. However, it may be pretext. I do not want to excuse Takuma Gakuen University. So I decided that I write my blog three hundred words every day. It is so hard. But if I did not write a lot of words, I can not pass this class. I want to pass this class so, I do my best. I can write fast. So I wrote my blog every day in spring term. And I study English. I solve exercise book about English. I want to raise TOEIC score. TOEIC score was reflected employment examinations. So I try to do my best.
I want to be English teacher. I did not want to be English teacher in my childhood because my parents are teacher when I entered here, I changed my thought. I want to take a work which used English. I want to put English to good account because I study English in KGU for four years. And, I want to be able to speak English smoothly. I often make a false step when I speak English. I think that English teacher can speak English smoothly. So I try to practice to be able to speak English.
When I wrote this essay, I was so surprised. So I have been studying English about twelve years. I do not have the realization. I have the confidence and do my best. My friends are honest. So they study English every day. I want to imitate them. I drive for rising English force. I think that I must not satisfy present force. I must drive for more high score. So I want to speak English smoothly. And I try to make foreign friends.(503words)
2009年12月18日金曜日
2009年12月14日月曜日
Scissors Hands
I introduce my favorite movie. This movie is “ Scissors hands”. This movie is love and fantasy story. Leading man is Jonny Depp. He appeared Pirates Of The Caribbean, Charlie And The Chocolate Factory or Sweeney Todd: The Demon Barber of Fleet Street. He is estimated in the world as a famous actor. I introduce this story.There was a man whose hands was scissors. His name is Edward. He is an android. He lives in castle in top of mountain. One day, a woman visited the castle to sell cosmetics. She returned with him. He fell in love with her daughter. She is Kim. Edward. He worked as a lot of her being pleased. For example, he sculptured ice for her. Kim glad to be made me by him. Because his hands are scissor, he could not hug her. “If I was normal human…”.He suffered again and again. But, Kim’s boy friend did not like him because he loved Kim. One day, her boy friend notified the police. So Edward escaped hard for the police. Finally, he had to return the church and became separate with her. Kim did not want to separate him. Edward did not want to separate her, too. Btu they can not live together in the future. They separated. Edward knows that Kim likes to sculpture ice for her. So he is sculpturing ice. If Kim visited here, Edward wanted to see them and pleasure her.
When I was 12 years old, I watched it first. My mother liked it so, she recommend me. I had not liked western movies. After the watching the movie, I could not stop crying. I understood that the movie is very famous and go on loving in the world. I like it very much. If I had children, I will watch it together. (304words)
Fry bread ice Party
I was invited “fry bread ice Party” on December 5th. My intention is not to go there because I was sleepy. However, I was called so I went to there.
I went to there AM 1:00 by my car. There were about 10 club members so, I was surprised. I did not think that there were such a lot of people. I prepared for making “fry bread ice”. We decollated “fry bread ice” so, it was very high calorie. But it was delicious. I ate a lot of it so I felt fullness.
The banquet started and they started drink drank. I did not drink it because I return by my car. They become to drunken person so, they started talking about dirt. But, I did not get drink, I joined it. I was asked a lot of questions about boy friend but, I did not answer.
Next, we started doing card game. I was beaten all games so, I disclosed. I had a good time so, I thought that I went to there is good. (176words)
I went to there AM 1:00 by my car. There were about 10 club members so, I was surprised. I did not think that there were such a lot of people. I prepared for making “fry bread ice”. We decollated “fry bread ice” so, it was very high calorie. But it was delicious. I ate a lot of it so I felt fullness.
The banquet started and they started drink drank. I did not drink it because I return by my car. They become to drunken person so, they started talking about dirt. But, I did not get drink, I joined it. I was asked a lot of questions about boy friend but, I did not answer.
Next, we started doing card game. I was beaten all games so, I disclosed. I had a good time so, I thought that I went to there is good. (176words)
2009年12月8日火曜日
BR: 02-06 Jack and the Beanstalk
I read “Jack and the Beanstalk”. It is very interesting. So I introduce this story.
Jack was so hungry. He searched the house for something to eat. His house was very poor. His mother said to him “ Sell the cow”. But he did not want to sell the cow, he must sell it. So they had no money.
He ran across the old man. The old man said to Jack “Shall we change the cow for beans? They are magic beans. Plant them today and you’ll see a beabstalk reaching to the clouds by morning.” Jack changed the cow for beans.
He talked about beans but, his mother got angry. And she throw away them in the garden. He disappointed. When he woke up, his room was still dark. Beans grow the big tree. He rid the tree and went on cloud. There was a church. He met a big woman. She said to him “ My husband is monster, so you should return fast.” But her husband came home. So she hided him. The husband said “I smell the blood of a little man...”. But she could hided Jack.
Jack could carried away the chicken bearing gold eggs while the monster slept. His mother glad to get the chicken. Jack rid the tree again. He tried to steal the gold herb. But the monster woke up. The monster went after Jack. But the monster fall down the tree so, he died. So he was happy in the future.
I have known this story in my childhood. But I did not know particular story. I thought Jack is very brave boy. This story can give us a lot of dream and wish. (283words)
Jack was so hungry. He searched the house for something to eat. His house was very poor. His mother said to him “ Sell the cow”. But he did not want to sell the cow, he must sell it. So they had no money.
He ran across the old man. The old man said to Jack “Shall we change the cow for beans? They are magic beans. Plant them today and you’ll see a beabstalk reaching to the clouds by morning.” Jack changed the cow for beans.
He talked about beans but, his mother got angry. And she throw away them in the garden. He disappointed. When he woke up, his room was still dark. Beans grow the big tree. He rid the tree and went on cloud. There was a church. He met a big woman. She said to him “ My husband is monster, so you should return fast.” But her husband came home. So she hided him. The husband said “I smell the blood of a little man...”. But she could hided Jack.
Jack could carried away the chicken bearing gold eggs while the monster slept. His mother glad to get the chicken. Jack rid the tree again. He tried to steal the gold herb. But the monster woke up. The monster went after Jack. But the monster fall down the tree so, he died. So he was happy in the future.
I have known this story in my childhood. But I did not know particular story. I thought Jack is very brave boy. This story can give us a lot of dream and wish. (283words)
2009年12月6日日曜日
NEWS QUESTION
News QUESTION
1. What did Hatoyama vow by 2020?
2. How many hits did get Ichiro?
3. What did Seoul protect?
4. Where did threaten punishment for rumormongering?
5. Who did hold 1st meeting of new gov?
6. Who did start final rally for poll?
7. Whose glove did fetch $49000 in Australia?
8. What cause that consumer affairs body deluged?
9. What did call men that keep house?
10. Did Aussies win in soccer?
Answer
1. gas emissions (P1)
2. 2000 (P20)
3. over flood (P5)
4. China (P5)
5. Ahmadinejad (P6)
6. Merkel (P7)
7. Michael Jackson (P7)
8. consunpition cut (P3)
9. ikumen (P3)
10. Yes, they did. (P17) (112WORDS)
1. What did Hatoyama vow by 2020?
2. How many hits did get Ichiro?
3. What did Seoul protect?
4. Where did threaten punishment for rumormongering?
5. Who did hold 1st meeting of new gov?
6. Who did start final rally for poll?
7. Whose glove did fetch $49000 in Australia?
8. What cause that consumer affairs body deluged?
9. What did call men that keep house?
10. Did Aussies win in soccer?
Answer
1. gas emissions (P1)
2. 2000 (P20)
3. over flood (P5)
4. China (P5)
5. Ahmadinejad (P6)
6. Merkel (P7)
7. Michael Jackson (P7)
8. consunpition cut (P3)
9. ikumen (P3)
10. Yes, they did. (P17) (112WORDS)
2009年12月1日火曜日
☆Tokyo DOGS☆
I watch “Tokyo DOGS” every Monday. It is very interesting. Leading actor is Syun Oguri and casts are Hiro Mizushima, Mikihisa Azuma or Yuriko Yoshitaka. Casts are so luxurious. This story is comedy, mystery and suspense. Syun Oguri chases the criminal who killed his father. But the criminal associated with Yuriko Yoshitaka. He was shocked. She loss of memory but, she remembered. She shoched too because former boyfriend is killer. However, she cooperate to arrest him.
When I watched it first, I thought that I want to watch next week early. I cared this drama’s sequel very much. My family likes this drama so, we always watch it.
I like Syun Oguri. He is so cool. He appeared at Hayayori Dango. His hair was brown. But his hair is black now. He suit black hair. He looks manly. I will continue boost him.(143words)
When I watched it first, I thought that I want to watch next week early. I cared this drama’s sequel very much. My family likes this drama so, we always watch it.
I like Syun Oguri. He is so cool. He appeared at Hayayori Dango. His hair was brown. But his hair is black now. He suit black hair. He looks manly. I will continue boost him.(143words)
BR:02-05 Puss in Boots
I read “Puss in Boots”. I knew this story but, I do not know particular story. I introduce this story.
There were three brothers. Their father died. So the oldest son got mill factory, the second got a donkey and the second got a orange tabby cat. The third thought that he eat a cat. However, there is nothing. So the cat said to him “ you are happy. Find me a bag and a pair of boots and you’ll see.” He gave the cat a bad, a pair of boot. The cat started hunting rabbits. So the cat took rabbits to the castle. The cat said “ your Royal Highness, I have brought you a gif from my master, the Duke of Carabas.”
The cats continued sending presents for the king. The king imagined that Duke of Carabas send presents for him. The cats ordered that the third swim nude a river. So the kings passed by the river. The cats shouted “that is Duke of Carabas.” The king helped him and gave him the full treatment in the castle. So the third and the princess married.
I thought that the cat is so smart. I want to feed such a cat. (203words)
There were three brothers. Their father died. So the oldest son got mill factory, the second got a donkey and the second got a orange tabby cat. The third thought that he eat a cat. However, there is nothing. So the cat said to him “ you are happy. Find me a bag and a pair of boots and you’ll see.” He gave the cat a bad, a pair of boot. The cat started hunting rabbits. So the cat took rabbits to the castle. The cat said “ your Royal Highness, I have brought you a gif from my master, the Duke of Carabas.”
The cats continued sending presents for the king. The king imagined that Duke of Carabas send presents for him. The cats ordered that the third swim nude a river. So the kings passed by the river. The cats shouted “that is Duke of Carabas.” The king helped him and gave him the full treatment in the castle. So the third and the princess married.
I thought that the cat is so smart. I want to feed such a cat. (203words)
2009年11月29日日曜日
Esay 02-03a My English track
I like to study English very much. So I entered Kumamoto Gakuen University. I like talk and write English too. I introduce my track how I studied English. And I will do my best in the future. I have my goal to study English, so I entered KGU.
I introduce my past. I have been studying English when I was six years old. I haunted English conversation school about six years. I haunted every Monday. I learn about talking, writing or speaking. It was so fun. I can make a lot of foreign friends. English conversation school teacher was Japanese but, foreign teachers sometime came there to teach English. When foreign teachers came there, students looked forward to coming them. I looked forward to coming them too. I like Japanese teacher, but foreign teachers tell us American culture. I was interested in them and like to talk foreign. When I was junior high school student, I studied hard very much. My weak point was grammar. So I remembered grammar with all my might. I was good at listening. So I could pass the test. I was very happy.
I try to write my blog every day. I was so busy because of Takuma Gakuen Festival’s preparation. I had to stay school at 10 o’clock every day. So I could write my blog completely. However, it may be pretext. I do not want to excuse Takuma Gakuen University. So I decided that I write my blog three hundred words every day. It is so hard. But if I did not write a lot of words, I can not pass this class. I want to pass this class so, I do my best. I can write fast. So I wrote my blog every day in spring term. And I study English. I solve exercise book about English. I want to raise TOEIC score. TOEIC score was reflected employment examinations. So I try to do my best.
I want to be English teacher. I did not want to be English teacher in my childhood because my parents are teacher. But I entered here, I changed my thought. I want to take a work which used English. I want to put English to good account because I study English in KGU for four years. So I want to be able to speak English smoothly. I often make a false step when I speak English. I think that English teacher can speak English smoothly. So I try to practice to be able to speak English.
When I wrote this essay, I was so surprised. So I have been studying English about twelve years. I do not have the realization. I have the confidence and do my best. My friends are honest. So they study English every day. I want to imitate them. I drive for rising English force. I think that I must not satisfy present force. I must drive for more high score. So I want to speak English smoothly. And I try to make foreign friends.(503words)
I introduce my past. I have been studying English when I was six years old. I haunted English conversation school about six years. I haunted every Monday. I learn about talking, writing or speaking. It was so fun. I can make a lot of foreign friends. English conversation school teacher was Japanese but, foreign teachers sometime came there to teach English. When foreign teachers came there, students looked forward to coming them. I looked forward to coming them too. I like Japanese teacher, but foreign teachers tell us American culture. I was interested in them and like to talk foreign. When I was junior high school student, I studied hard very much. My weak point was grammar. So I remembered grammar with all my might. I was good at listening. So I could pass the test. I was very happy.
I try to write my blog every day. I was so busy because of Takuma Gakuen Festival’s preparation. I had to stay school at 10 o’clock every day. So I could write my blog completely. However, it may be pretext. I do not want to excuse Takuma Gakuen University. So I decided that I write my blog three hundred words every day. It is so hard. But if I did not write a lot of words, I can not pass this class. I want to pass this class so, I do my best. I can write fast. So I wrote my blog every day in spring term. And I study English. I solve exercise book about English. I want to raise TOEIC score. TOEIC score was reflected employment examinations. So I try to do my best.
I want to be English teacher. I did not want to be English teacher in my childhood because my parents are teacher. But I entered here, I changed my thought. I want to take a work which used English. I want to put English to good account because I study English in KGU for four years. So I want to be able to speak English smoothly. I often make a false step when I speak English. I think that English teacher can speak English smoothly. So I try to practice to be able to speak English.
When I wrote this essay, I was so surprised. So I have been studying English about twelve years. I do not have the realization. I have the confidence and do my best. My friends are honest. So they study English every day. I want to imitate them. I drive for rising English force. I think that I must not satisfy present force. I must drive for more high score. So I want to speak English smoothly. And I try to make foreign friends.(503words)
2009年11月25日水曜日
Last Department meeting
I went to go Kuzyuu with my club members to camu for training. Third grade retired from Yoth Hostel club. So we celebrated that they grade retired from it.There was Youth general meeting on the morning so, we must get up early. Youth general meetnig is Youth Hostel members think about ourself. I tensed very much. Youth general meeting was highly nervous. There was a senior who cried. I did not go Kuzyuu because I falled down my tension in Youth general meeting. And I was bad health. My sister was down with influenza. So I had a mask to remove to my friends.I had to be late because car driver had not arrived yet. So we waited about fourty minutes. We leaved late. We dropped in Daikanbou to eat soft cream. It was so cold but, it was delicious. We feel so happy. We leaved last, we arrived second. Another members lost the way. I was surprised because the way is one. I can not lost the way.
Dinner is food boiled in a ceramic pot. We decided by “rock-paper-scissors”. Our group won so, we chose Kimchi. It is very spicy for me to eat but, it is delicious. I was full up early.
After the dinner, we were held the drawing by third grade. I was hit a CD. I was very happy. The banquet warmed up. I had a glass too much so, I got drunk. But I had a good time. There is the last event that we can spend with third grade. So I was so lonely. However, second grade must pull ourself together. I want to pull to first grade. And I want to enjoy. (283words)
2009年11月23日月曜日
Essay 02-01b My favorie place
My favorite place is my room. I have used my room since I was 15 years old. There are a lot of stuffed animals and CDs. I like listen to music. For example, Kato Miriya, EXILE or Arashi. I often study English as listening to music. Then I concentrate on studying English.
The place where I can relax is bath room. I often take a bath half a body. I want to be healthy body. So I take a bath half a body everyday about 30 minutes. I can diet there. I often put a bath pill into bathtub. If I put a bath pill into bathtub, I can relax there. I often white bath pill. It can reach my tiredness. So I listen to music. I can stay bath room for a long time.
Next, I like place is my university’s ROSON. There are a lot of my friends. If I went to there, I can meet my friends. My club members often gather there. If I had no class, I make certain of going to there to talk with my friends. We talk a long time as eating cakes.
I like Osaka very much. First, I went to Osaka with my club members. There were thronged with a lot of people. And, there were a lot of places to visit. For example, doutonbori, tensyukaku or Osaka zyou. I was glad to visit there. And Osaka foods were very good taste. We ate octopus fritters, okonomiyaki or yakiniku. I want to live Osaka in the future. I do not like the place where is thronged with a lot of people, but I like Osaka. Osaka develops traffics. So Osaka citizen do not need cars. They can use bus or train or subway. But Kumamoto citizen can not use subway. If there is subway in Kumamoto, we would be able to need cars. So I want to live Osaka. (320words)
The place where I can relax is bath room. I often take a bath half a body. I want to be healthy body. So I take a bath half a body everyday about 30 minutes. I can diet there. I often put a bath pill into bathtub. If I put a bath pill into bathtub, I can relax there. I often white bath pill. It can reach my tiredness. So I listen to music. I can stay bath room for a long time.
Next, I like place is my university’s ROSON. There are a lot of my friends. If I went to there, I can meet my friends. My club members often gather there. If I had no class, I make certain of going to there to talk with my friends. We talk a long time as eating cakes.
I like Osaka very much. First, I went to Osaka with my club members. There were thronged with a lot of people. And, there were a lot of places to visit. For example, doutonbori, tensyukaku or Osaka zyou. I was glad to visit there. And Osaka foods were very good taste. We ate octopus fritters, okonomiyaki or yakiniku. I want to live Osaka in the future. I do not like the place where is thronged with a lot of people, but I like Osaka. Osaka develops traffics. So Osaka citizen do not need cars. They can use bus or train or subway. But Kumamoto citizen can not use subway. If there is subway in Kumamoto, we would be able to need cars. So I want to live Osaka. (320words)
Essay 02-01a My favorte place
My favorite place is my room. I have used my room since I was 15 years old. There are a lot of stuffed animals and CDs. I like listen to music. For example, Kato Miriya, EXILE or Arashi. I often study English as listening to music. Then I concentrate on studying English.
The place where I can relax is bath room. I often take a bath half a body. I want to be healthy body. So I take a bath half a body everyday about 30 minutes. I can diet there. I often put a bath pill into bathtub. If I put a bath pill into bathtub, I can relax there. I often white bath pill. It can reach my tiredness. So I listen to music. I can stay bath room for a long time.
Next, I like place is my university’s ROSON. There are a lot of my friends. If I went to there, I can meet my friends. My club members often gather there. If I had no class, I make certain of going to there to talk with my friends. We talk a long time as eating cakes.
I like Osaka very much. First, I went to Osaka with my club members. There were thronged with a lot of people. And, there were a lot of places to visit. For example, doutonbori, tensyukaku or Osaka zyou. I was glad to visit there. And Osaka foods were very good taste. We ate octopus fritters, okonomiyaki or yakiniku. I want to live Osaka in the future.(257words)
The place where I can relax is bath room. I often take a bath half a body. I want to be healthy body. So I take a bath half a body everyday about 30 minutes. I can diet there. I often put a bath pill into bathtub. If I put a bath pill into bathtub, I can relax there. I often white bath pill. It can reach my tiredness. So I listen to music. I can stay bath room for a long time.
Next, I like place is my university’s ROSON. There are a lot of my friends. If I went to there, I can meet my friends. My club members often gather there. If I had no class, I make certain of going to there to talk with my friends. We talk a long time as eating cakes.
I like Osaka very much. First, I went to Osaka with my club members. There were thronged with a lot of people. And, there were a lot of places to visit. For example, doutonbori, tensyukaku or Osaka zyou. I was glad to visit there. And Osaka foods were very good taste. We ate octopus fritters, okonomiyaki or yakiniku. I want to live Osaka in the future.(257words)
My family
I have a happy family. My husband is a layer.And,He is very cool. I will married to
Ken Miyake. I live in Tokyo.
My daughters are very beautiful, and my son is very cool. My daughters play the piano. My son play soccer very well!! They grow up to be very kind. And, they are good to us. We have a dog name “SNOOPY” . He is very smart. And ,He can talk with us.
We are very happy!! (84words)
Ken Miyake. I live in Tokyo.
My daughters are very beautiful, and my son is very cool. My daughters play the piano. My son play soccer very well!! They grow up to be very kind. And, they are good to us. We have a dog name “SNOOPY” . He is very smart. And ,He can talk with us.
We are very happy!! (84words)
2009年11月20日金曜日
Essay 02-02b Web site reviews
I like Full House. Full House is Amecican home drama. It was made about 20 years ago and continued a long time. It was loved everyone. Hardly Full House do not know.
First, I know character's life history. Characters bear the burden. For example, D.J, Michelle and step hanie lost them mother. I knew structure of family. That family is so complex. They were very sad. So Jes, Danny and Joey took the place of them mother. Joey nae Joe are not real family but, they pet them. They look like real family. Joe married with Redecca, but he continued with his life. The couple likes the home too. Sisters have loved by everyone. I thought about various programs. The family faced a lot of programs. But the family always work together to solve programs.Next, I knew this drama’s popularity. “Full House” was loved by world people. There are a lot of funs in Japan too. I am the our one person. There are a lot of Full House’s funs in the world. A lot of funs wrote in comments of boots. It is evidence for Full House is loved by everyone yet.
I interested in American sweets. I knew this web site. I knew difference from American sweets and Japanese sweets. I was very surprised to read this article because there were a lot of things that I did not know.
First, American sweets are so sweet and big and colorful. American chocolates are sweeter than Japanese chocolates. American cakes are twice as big as Japanese cakes. So a lot of Japanese cannot eat all the United States cakes. I want to try to eat a American cake at once. They are so good impressive but, they seem to be unhealthy. American cakes. A bad additive for the body is used the United States cake. But, American said “ it is so cool”. Certainly, it is so good taste. But I do not think that I want to eat it.
Next, American sweets are used a lot of sugar. The recipe is recorded on this site. I was surprised that abundant sugar are used. If I stay America an hour, I will put on weight certainly. I saw this site, and shocked but I like them. I learned about American culture. I like Japanese foods so it is so healthy and low calorie. If I had foreign friends, I will recommend Japanese foods. (405words)
First, I know character's life history. Characters bear the burden. For example, D.J, Michelle and step hanie lost them mother. I knew structure of family. That family is so complex. They were very sad. So Jes, Danny and Joey took the place of them mother. Joey nae Joe are not real family but, they pet them. They look like real family. Joe married with Redecca, but he continued with his life. The couple likes the home too. Sisters have loved by everyone. I thought about various programs. The family faced a lot of programs. But the family always work together to solve programs.Next, I knew this drama’s popularity. “Full House” was loved by world people. There are a lot of funs in Japan too. I am the our one person. There are a lot of Full House’s funs in the world. A lot of funs wrote in comments of boots. It is evidence for Full House is loved by everyone yet.
I interested in American sweets. I knew this web site. I knew difference from American sweets and Japanese sweets. I was very surprised to read this article because there were a lot of things that I did not know.
First, American sweets are so sweet and big and colorful. American chocolates are sweeter than Japanese chocolates. American cakes are twice as big as Japanese cakes. So a lot of Japanese cannot eat all the United States cakes. I want to try to eat a American cake at once. They are so good impressive but, they seem to be unhealthy. American cakes. A bad additive for the body is used the United States cake. But, American said “ it is so cool”. Certainly, it is so good taste. But I do not think that I want to eat it.
Next, American sweets are used a lot of sugar. The recipe is recorded on this site. I was surprised that abundant sugar are used. If I stay America an hour, I will put on weight certainly. I saw this site, and shocked but I like them. I learned about American culture. I like Japanese foods so it is so healthy and low calorie. If I had foreign friends, I will recommend Japanese foods. (405words)
Essay 2-02a Web site reviews
I like Full House. Full House is Amecican home drama. It was made about 20 years ago and continued a long time. It was loved everyone. Hardly Full House do not knowFirst, I know character's life history. Characters bear the burden. For example, D.J, Michelle and step hanie lost them mother. I knew structure of family. That family is so complex. They were very sad. So Jes, Danny and Joey took the place of them mother. Joey nae Joe are not real family but, they pet them. They look like real family. Joe married with Redecca, but he continued with his life. The couple likes the home too. Sisters have loved by everyone. I thought about various programs. The family faced a lot of programs. But the family always work together to solve programs.Next, I knew this drama’s popularity. “Full House” was loved by world people. There are a lot of funs in Japan too. I am the our one person. There are a lot of Full House’s funs in the world. A lot of funs wrote in comments of boots. It is evidence for Full House is loved by everyone yet.
I interested in American sweets. I knew this web site. I knew difference from American sweets and Japanese sweets. I was very surprised to read this article because there were a lot of things that I did not know.
First, American sweets are so sweet and big and colorful. American chocolates are sweeter than Japanese chocolates. American cakes are twice as big as Japanese cakes. So a lot of Japanese cannot eat all the United States cakes. I want to try to eat a American cake at once. They are so good impressive but, they seem to be unhealthy. American cakes. A bad additive for the body is used the United States cake. But, American said “ it is so cool”. Certainly, it is so good taste. But I do not think that I want to eat it.
Next, American sweets are used a lot of sugar. The recipe is recorded on this site. I was surprised that abundant sugar are used. If I stay America an hour, I will put on weight certainly. I saw this site, and shocked but I like them. I learned about American culture. (382words)
I interested in American sweets. I knew this web site. I knew difference from American sweets and Japanese sweets. I was very surprised to read this article because there were a lot of things that I did not know.
First, American sweets are so sweet and big and colorful. American chocolates are sweeter than Japanese chocolates. American cakes are twice as big as Japanese cakes. So a lot of Japanese cannot eat all the United States cakes. I want to try to eat a American cake at once. They are so good impressive but, they seem to be unhealthy. American cakes. A bad additive for the body is used the United States cake. But, American said “ it is so cool”. Certainly, it is so good taste. But I do not think that I want to eat it.
Next, American sweets are used a lot of sugar. The recipe is recorded on this site. I was surprised that abundant sugar are used. If I stay America an hour, I will put on weight certainly. I saw this site, and shocked but I like them. I learned about American culture. (382words)
2009年11月19日木曜日
My memories
I was five years ago. When I played with the sand, a bee approached me. So I was stuck by the bee. I was very painful. So I cried for a long time. It was painful as burnt.
My mother took it to the hospital for me soon. My hand was greatly swollen. I was safe because it had treated it at once.
However, after that playing with sand and the bee have become trauma. Therefore, it came not to do playing with sand. If playing with sand only had not to be done at that time, it regretted many times.(103words)
My mother took it to the hospital for me soon. My hand was greatly swollen. I was safe because it had treated it at once.
However, after that playing with sand and the bee have become trauma. Therefore, it came not to do playing with sand. If playing with sand only had not to be done at that time, it regretted many times.(103words)
Home Town
My hometown is Kumamoto. Kumamoto is very large. There are a lot of place to visit in Kumamoto.
First, there is the Kumamoto castle. It is about the history. It was built by Kato
Kiyomasa in Edo age. It was very large and big.
Second, seas are very beautiful in Amakusa. There are a lot of corals and fishes.
Third, the caldera is very big. It is the best caldera any other.
Finally, watermelons and tomatos are a special product of Tochigi Prefecture. Especially, watermelons are top of Japan. So we like watermelons.
Kumamoto is countryside but, I like Kumamoto very much.(104words)
First, there is the Kumamoto castle. It is about the history. It was built by Kato
Kiyomasa in Edo age. It was very large and big.
Second, seas are very beautiful in Amakusa. There are a lot of corals and fishes.
Third, the caldera is very big. It is the best caldera any other.
Finally, watermelons and tomatos are a special product of Tochigi Prefecture. Especially, watermelons are top of Japan. So we like watermelons.
Kumamoto is countryside but, I like Kumamoto very much.(104words)
Youth hostel★
I hung out today with my club friend and senior.
First, we took a print club. When I hung out with my friends, I always took print clubs. I was very glad to take the print club with seniors.
Next, we went to Karaoke. We stayed there about 2 hours. We sung Koda Kumi, Arash, Hamasaki Ayumi or Kato Miriya. My seniors were good at the song. Especially, I liked Nishino Kana. And my friends and I were treat by my seniors. I felt sorry to treat.
So we went to Osyou to eat dinner. I had never been to there so I looked forward it. I ate Gyoza and Tenshinhan. It was very good taste. Tenshinyhan is very cheap. I was so full up and happy. Seniors guided us in about Youth Hostel. I relieved. I thought that I will work hard to do.
I love my seniors very much. I had a good time. I want to hung up again. (162words)
First, we took a print club. When I hung out with my friends, I always took print clubs. I was very glad to take the print club with seniors.
Next, we went to Karaoke. We stayed there about 2 hours. We sung Koda Kumi, Arash, Hamasaki Ayumi or Kato Miriya. My seniors were good at the song. Especially, I liked Nishino Kana. And my friends and I were treat by my seniors. I felt sorry to treat.
So we went to Osyou to eat dinner. I had never been to there so I looked forward it. I ate Gyoza and Tenshinhan. It was very good taste. Tenshinyhan is very cheap. I was so full up and happy. Seniors guided us in about Youth Hostel. I relieved. I thought that I will work hard to do.
I love my seniors very much. I had a good time. I want to hung up again. (162words)
2009年11月18日水曜日
Osaoka travelling
I went to Osaka with my club members in September 14-16. We walked for a long time. We were very tired, but we had a good time. We ate a lot of, so I was a young man full of vigor. For example, we ate octopus fritters, broiled meats, skewer cutlet or Okonomiyaki. They were very taste. Because I ate a lot of, I put on weight. I was shocked.
We went to a lot of places. For example, we went to Doutonnbori, Guriko or Shinsai brudge. I was glad to see a lot of famous place. (97words)
We went to a lot of places. For example, we went to Doutonnbori, Guriko or Shinsai brudge. I was glad to see a lot of famous place. (97words)
BR:02-04 Arabian Night
I introduce this story. It is instigated by the wizard from Africa where Aladdin who lives poorly with mother in China swindles his uncle, and the story starts because it obtained the lamp of the magic that exists in anakura.
The perverseness showed up when the lamp was rubbed. The perverseness has power that realizes the wish for the person who rubbed the lamp, and Aladdin gets very rich use of the power, and marries emperor's daughter.
However, the wizard plunders of the lamp of magic, and takes emperor's daughter to Africa in each Aladdin's palace. However, Aladdin gets back the lamp of magic from the wizard by borrowing the power of the perverseness of the ring.
I like this story since I was 3 years old. Arabian Nights Entertainments was made into a film. When I watched it, I knew this story. (143words)
The perverseness showed up when the lamp was rubbed. The perverseness has power that realizes the wish for the person who rubbed the lamp, and Aladdin gets very rich use of the power, and marries emperor's daughter.
However, the wizard plunders of the lamp of magic, and takes emperor's daughter to Africa in each Aladdin's palace. However, Aladdin gets back the lamp of magic from the wizard by borrowing the power of the perverseness of the ring.
I like this story since I was 3 years old. Arabian Nights Entertainments was made into a film. When I watched it, I knew this story. (143words)
2009年11月16日月曜日
BR: 02-03 The Fox and the Crow
I introduce this story. There was a fox. Fox was always hungry.
The fox discovered the crow to have the cheese. The fox wanted the cheese. The fox said to the crow that had said to attract the crow. “You are pretty” or “ What beautiful feathers”. And, the fox told the crow to sing the song. The crow sang without doubting the fox. The cheese dropped momentarily of the singing of the crow. And, the fox ate the cheese. The crow felt bitter very much.
I thought smartness though I thought that the fox was very deep. I thought that the fox had wisdom to live. The fox will succeed in the society if the fox is man. If the fox is man, it will be disliked by a surrounding person. I want to become deep, too.(138 words)
The fox discovered the crow to have the cheese. The fox wanted the cheese. The fox said to the crow that had said to attract the crow. “You are pretty” or “ What beautiful feathers”. And, the fox told the crow to sing the song. The crow sang without doubting the fox. The cheese dropped momentarily of the singing of the crow. And, the fox ate the cheese. The crow felt bitter very much.
I thought smartness though I thought that the fox was very deep. I thought that the fox had wisdom to live. The fox will succeed in the society if the fox is man. If the fox is man, it will be disliked by a surrounding person. I want to become deep, too.(138 words)
2009年11月15日日曜日
BR:02-02 Princess Polly and the Pony
I introduce this story. Princess Polly was in trouble. She liked to play outside very actively. Therefore, she often stained the dress with mud. Her parents were angry to her. Her parents forbade her to play outside.
Her father took her to the town. She learnt for the race to be going to be played tomorrow. Her parents have won the championship by this race. She was interested in this race. Afterwards, she shopped for her father each other. At that time, she hit on the disguise to the race and participation.
She disguised getting up early and participated in the race. She splendidly won the championship. However, her parents noticed her disguising it. They disliked dirt of her. Therefore, they shouted her. She got depressed because it was angry though it had won the championship by the race. However, other entrants spoke very highly of her. Parents of the woman who had seen it praised her. After that, she came often to play outside. (165words)
Her father took her to the town. She learnt for the race to be going to be played tomorrow. Her parents have won the championship by this race. She was interested in this race. Afterwards, she shopped for her father each other. At that time, she hit on the disguise to the race and participation.
She disguised getting up early and participated in the race. She splendidly won the championship. However, her parents noticed her disguising it. They disliked dirt of her. Therefore, they shouted her. She got depressed because it was angry though it had won the championship by the race. However, other entrants spoke very highly of her. Parents of the woman who had seen it praised her. After that, she came often to play outside. (165words)
2009年11月8日日曜日
BR:02-01 Cinderella
I have been liked this story since I was 3 years old. This story is so famous very much. I introduce this story.
Long long time ago, there was something who named Cinderella. She lives with two sisters and her mother. Her father died. Two sisters and her mother were very spiteful. So Cinderella always keep house. Her friends were mice only.
One day the dance party held in the chateau. Two sisters and her mother prepared for going to the dance party. Cinderella helped them. She wanted to go there but she must stay at home.
She spoke to a mouse. Suddenly, a witch appeared. Cinderella was surprised very much. A witch said “I will realize your wish”. She said “ I want to go the dance party”. A witch changed the pumpkin into the wagon. And she changed a mouse into a horse. But she must come back at 0 o’clock because magic put on her untie. Cinderella made a promise with a witch.
Cinderella hastily went to the dance party. So the prince approached her. She danced with a prince. He became to like Cinderella. But she must come back. She forgot shoe of glass because she hastily came back.
A prince could not forget her. A prince made this shoe a clue and looked for her. But he could find her. At last he can find her. So they married.(234words)
Long long time ago, there was something who named Cinderella. She lives with two sisters and her mother. Her father died. Two sisters and her mother were very spiteful. So Cinderella always keep house. Her friends were mice only.
One day the dance party held in the chateau. Two sisters and her mother prepared for going to the dance party. Cinderella helped them. She wanted to go there but she must stay at home.
She spoke to a mouse. Suddenly, a witch appeared. Cinderella was surprised very much. A witch said “I will realize your wish”. She said “ I want to go the dance party”. A witch changed the pumpkin into the wagon. And she changed a mouse into a horse. But she must come back at 0 o’clock because magic put on her untie. Cinderella made a promise with a witch.
Cinderella hastily went to the dance party. So the prince approached her. She danced with a prince. He became to like Cinderella. But she must come back. She forgot shoe of glass because she hastily came back.
A prince could not forget her. A prince made this shoe a clue and looked for her. But he could find her. At last he can find her. So they married.(234words)
2009年11月4日水曜日
I like Full House. Full House is Amecican home drama. It was made about 20 years ago and continued a long time. It was loved everyone. Hardly Full House do not know.
First, I know character's life history. Characters bear the burden. For example, D.J, Michelle and step hanie lost them mother. I knew structure of family. That family is so complex. They were very sad. So Jes, Danny and Joey took the place of them mother. Joey nae Joe are not real family but, they pet them. They look like real family. Joe married with Redecca, but he continued with his life. The couple likes the home too. Sisters have loved by everyone. I thought about various programs. The family faced a lot of programs. But the family always work together to solve programs.
Next, I knew this drama’s popularity. “Full House” was loved by world people. (148words)
First, I know character's life history. Characters bear the burden. For example, D.J, Michelle and step hanie lost them mother. I knew structure of family. That family is so complex. They were very sad. So Jes, Danny and Joey took the place of them mother. Joey nae Joe are not real family but, they pet them. They look like real family. Joe married with Redecca, but he continued with his life. The couple likes the home too. Sisters have loved by everyone. I thought about various programs. The family faced a lot of programs. But the family always work together to solve programs.
Next, I knew this drama’s popularity. “Full House” was loved by world people. (148words)
2009年9月28日月曜日
My Birthday★
My birthday is August 14. The boyfriend kept one's birthday for me. I went to boyfriend's house by train on the night, August 13. He came to the station with the car.
And, I stayed at his house. He gave the present momentarily became 0 o'clock. The present was a necklace. I was surprised and feel so happy. I was going to value the necklace. (66words)
And, I stayed at his house. He gave the present momentarily became 0 o'clock. The present was a necklace. I was surprised and feel so happy. I was going to value the necklace. (66words)
Talking with Friends
I hung up high school’s friends on August 12. I looked forward to meet my friends because I had met them since 4 months. We met at the station, and we went to the restaurant to eat lunch as it was. We did not feel that it met after a long time.
We forgot time passed and talked for a long time. When I noticed, I was surprised to have stayed in the restaurant for as many as eight hours.
I was made to think hearing friend's story. They are making an effort toward the dream. They think about the future. However, I do not think about anything. As for me, I became shameful. I lost sight of the reason that had come to the university. I will find its dream spending time of the future.(136words)
We forgot time passed and talked for a long time. When I noticed, I was surprised to have stayed in the restaurant for as many as eight hours.
I was made to think hearing friend's story. They are making an effort toward the dream. They think about the future. However, I do not think about anything. As for me, I became shameful. I lost sight of the reason that had come to the university. I will find its dream spending time of the future.(136words)
2009年9月18日金曜日
Tamana's FIRWORK★
Fireworks were held by Tamana on August 7. I went to fireworks with my boyfriend. My friend stayed at my house. The friend set his hair for me. And, the yukata was dressed to the friend for me. After a while, my boyfriend arrived at my house. It was strained very much because meeting my mother was the first time in my boyfriend. My mother was looking forward to meeting my boyfriend very much. My boyfriend slept for a while in the bed after having eaten the evening meal in my house. Because he had gone to the soccer match since the morning, it was very tired. And, we walked to the river beach. He said to me that you were lovely. I was very glad. We ate the shaved ice and the octopus ball. Fireworks were very beautiful. I look at this fireworks every year. However, the boyfriend saw this fireworks for the first time. He had been very impressed. I thought that he next year about this fireworks. (170wprds)
2009年9月11日金曜日
Takahama Gassyuku★
I went to Takahama ocean too with my club members. I went to late with my friends because of part time job. We went to the sea by senior's car. Because I had met the senior after a long time, I was glad.
We joined the friend about the sea. And, it was very happy to do beach volleyball. Our dinner is BBQ. A lot of meats are delicious. I took a lot of pictures with my friends, seniors and juniors. Finally, I was pushed down in the sea by the senior. Therefore, my clothes were soaked. I did the shower and drank sake. Because I was very tired, I has gotten drunk at once.
I saw and was talking about the star until the morning. Seniors seriously heard my worry. I was refreshing by the favor. Because I was worried for a long time, it became very easy. Because I renewed, I thought that seniors were gentle. I love seniors. Therefore, I do not want seniors to retire. When they end the campus festival, seniors retire. Therefore, I want to make the campus festival a lot of memories.(189words)
We joined the friend about the sea. And, it was very happy to do beach volleyball. Our dinner is BBQ. A lot of meats are delicious. I took a lot of pictures with my friends, seniors and juniors. Finally, I was pushed down in the sea by the senior. Therefore, my clothes were soaked. I did the shower and drank sake. Because I was very tired, I has gotten drunk at once.
I saw and was talking about the star until the morning. Seniors seriously heard my worry. I was refreshing by the favor. Because I was worried for a long time, it became very easy. Because I renewed, I thought that seniors were gentle. I love seniors. Therefore, I do not want seniors to retire. When they end the campus festival, seniors retire. Therefore, I want to make the campus festival a lot of memories.(189words)
2009年9月1日火曜日
SEA BATHING
I went to Takahama sea with my friends on August 2. We scheduled it for one month. I could not sleep because I looked forward to go to there. I drove about 7 hours but I was not tired.
When we arrived the sea, the tension went up in us. We made a quick change, changed into a bathing suit, and entered the sea. The sea was transparent and very beautiful. A lot of fish swam. The water of the sea was cold and was very pleasant. We swam about 4 hours. So our skin became brown.
We talked in a return car. We talked about love. I had a god time. (113words)
When we arrived the sea, the tension went up in us. We made a quick change, changed into a bathing suit, and entered the sea. The sea was transparent and very beautiful. A lot of fish swam. The water of the sea was cold and was very pleasant. We swam about 4 hours. So our skin became brown.
We talked in a return car. We talked about love. I had a god time. (113words)
2009年7月24日金曜日
Gokusen
I like “Gokusenn” so I want to watch the movie.
It started when I was 13 years old. I watched it every Wednesday. I look forward to this drama. I introduce this story.
Main character is Yamaguchi Kumiko. She is high school teacher. But she is keeping a secret. In fact, Her lineage is gangster. If this truth came out school, she would have to leave school. She will take charge of the class to which the defect is collected. Students did not try to hear her story. On the contrary, they tried to harm her. She was annoyed by students who did not hear saying completely. She kept believing students so that be said badly from surroundings by them. As for students, the effect began to believe her because they were. I think to give up this drama seeing.(140words)
It started when I was 13 years old. I watched it every Wednesday. I look forward to this drama. I introduce this story.
Main character is Yamaguchi Kumiko. She is high school teacher. But she is keeping a secret. In fact, Her lineage is gangster. If this truth came out school, she would have to leave school. She will take charge of the class to which the defect is collected. Students did not try to hear her story. On the contrary, they tried to harm her. She was annoyed by students who did not hear saying completely. She kept believing students so that be said badly from surroundings by them. As for students, the effect began to believe her because they were. I think to give up this drama seeing.(140words)
2009年7月20日月曜日
Essay 1-02b University life
I enjoy in my university life. I commute from Tamana everyday. It is very hard but, it makes me slender. I became thin about 5 kilogram. I am very happy but, my mother is worry me. So my mother makes me lunchbox everyday. I eat it in the bakery.
I belong to a Youth Hostel club. It is traveling club. There are about 60 people in my club. I went to Fukuoka, Kagosima and Saga with club members. I had a good time. Club members are friendship. We often hung out.
I study English very hard everyday in library. I like library very much and library is very comfortable. This library is so quiet. So I often study English or write reports in the library.
I like bakery. The bakery’ bread is very low cost and very delicious. There are a lot of kinds of breads. Especially I like “choch bread”. It is very sweet and aromatic. It is 140 yen. So it is enexpensive for me to buy.
I go to KGU by train and bus. The train and bus takes about 60 minutes. I thought that it is very hard for me. However, I am accustomed to use the train and bus. But I envious of people who living Kumamoto city. Because they need not use train or bus. I want to live Kumamoto city.
I entered KGU to study particular English. I dislike English so I wanted to overcome. Especially, I was not good at writing. But I can overcome it because I take writing class every Wednesday. I must writing blog 10000words. So I write my blog every day. I get writing force.(277words)
I belong to a Youth Hostel club. It is traveling club. There are about 60 people in my club. I went to Fukuoka, Kagosima and Saga with club members. I had a good time. Club members are friendship. We often hung out.
I study English very hard everyday in library. I like library very much and library is very comfortable. This library is so quiet. So I often study English or write reports in the library.
I like bakery. The bakery’ bread is very low cost and very delicious. There are a lot of kinds of breads. Especially I like “choch bread”. It is very sweet and aromatic. It is 140 yen. So it is enexpensive for me to buy.
I go to KGU by train and bus. The train and bus takes about 60 minutes. I thought that it is very hard for me. However, I am accustomed to use the train and bus. But I envious of people who living Kumamoto city. Because they need not use train or bus. I want to live Kumamoto city.
I entered KGU to study particular English. I dislike English so I wanted to overcome. Especially, I was not good at writing. But I can overcome it because I take writing class every Wednesday. I must writing blog 10000words. So I write my blog every day. I get writing force.(277words)
2009年7月17日金曜日
Holly Potter(*●´3｀）
I watched “ Holly Potter” with my friend. We went to Kumamoto Kurea by my friends driving. I looked fowared to watching “Holly Potter”. We bought the ticket and did UFO catcher. I could get a cute key holder. I could get Rirakkuma’s suffed animal so, I feel very regrettable.We bought a hamburger and entered the movie theater. It is very difficult for me to understand this story. I could not understand this story because I had not read “Holly Potter”. I thought that the story is very interesting. the story’s ending is very sad. So I cried. I thought that “ You must be kidding”. I feel very sad
I try to read this book. (117words)
Essay 1-02a University life
I enjoy in my university life. I commute from Tamana everyday. It is very hard but, it makes me slender. I became thin about 5 kilogram. I am very happy but, my mother is worry me. So my mother makes me lunchbox everyday. I eat it in the bakery.
I belong to a Youth Hostel club. It is traveling club. There are about 60 people in my club. I went to Fukuoka, Kagosima and Saga with club members. I had a good time. Club members are friendship. We often hung out.
I study English very hard everyday in library. I like library very much and library is very comfortable. This library is so quiet. So I often study English or write reports in the library.
I like bakery. The bakery’ bread is very low cost and very delicious. There are a lot of kinds of breads. Especially I like “choch bread”. It is very sweet and aromatic. It is 140 yen. So it is enexpensive for me to buy.
I go to KGU by train and bus. The train and bus takes about 60 minutes. I thought that it is very hard for me. However, I am accustomed to use the train and bus. But I envious of people who living Kumamoto city. Because they need not use train or bus. I want to live Kumamoto city.
I entered KGU to study particular English. I dislike English so I wanted to overcome. Especially, I was not good at writing. But I can overcome it because I take writing class every Wednesday. I must writing blog 10000words. So I write my blog every day. I get writing force.(277words)
I belong to a Youth Hostel club. It is traveling club. There are about 60 people in my club. I went to Fukuoka, Kagosima and Saga with club members. I had a good time. Club members are friendship. We often hung out.
I study English very hard everyday in library. I like library very much and library is very comfortable. This library is so quiet. So I often study English or write reports in the library.
I like bakery. The bakery’ bread is very low cost and very delicious. There are a lot of kinds of breads. Especially I like “choch bread”. It is very sweet and aromatic. It is 140 yen. So it is enexpensive for me to buy.
I go to KGU by train and bus. The train and bus takes about 60 minutes. I thought that it is very hard for me. However, I am accustomed to use the train and bus. But I envious of people who living Kumamoto city. Because they need not use train or bus. I want to live Kumamoto city.
I entered KGU to study particular English. I dislike English so I wanted to overcome. Especially, I was not good at writing. But I can overcome it because I take writing class every Wednesday. I must writing blog 10000words. So I write my blog every day. I get writing force.(277words)
2009年7月15日水曜日
Essay 1-03b: Lilo and Stitch
I like Disney. Especially, I like lilo &Stitch . When I was a junior high school student, I saw this movie for the first time. I was made to think a lot by seeing Lilo & Stitch.
First, I thought about family. Lilo lost parents and was raised by the elder sister. Therefore, she kept Stitch as a pet. He did not know this year when it raged by the monster. However, Lilo teaches variety for Stitch. He comes to understand person's mind gradually. This is evidence that she considers Stitch to be a true family.
Lilo was a family, and thought Stitch to be the best best friend. Stitch is also the same. Therefore, it went to help at the risk of one's life when she was kidnapped.
I thought that the best friend was a very important person. It is existence that can be relied on best when I am embarrassed. I have been helped many times before by the best friend. Therefore, when the best friend is embarrassed, I wanting help best. I want to value the best friend in the future, and want to associate all my life.
I want to value the family. I wish to express my gratitude especially in parents for having brought me up here. I cannot pass on the word of gratitude because I am shameful, and either wants to tell the gratitude.(231words)
2009年7月14日火曜日
BR 1-13: The Goose that laid the Golden Eggs
I read " The Goose that laid the Golden Eggs". I introduce this story.Tom lived in a small cottage. His wife is Elena. They were very poor but they were happy. They had a goat, hens and geese. He put eggs and go to the village to sell it every morning.
One day, he found strange egg. The egg is gold. The husband and wife were very surprised. They had never seen it. He brought the goldsmith in the village. The goldsmith was amazed too. The gold smith wanted it. So He exchanged the egg for money. So he bought a new dress for his wife. However, she was not happy. She wanted a lot of money. Because he bought it, he had no money.
He found another golden egg next morning. He exchanged the egg for money and bought new clothes for himself. They built a new big house. They became rich.
They became greedy. They wanted golden eggs more. They thought of killing the goose and remove a lot of golden eggs. So they killed the goose. But there were not a golden eggs. So they became so pool.
I think that this story is very cruel story. Because they killed the goose, they would return pool life. The punishment would be hit. We must not kill animals and bring up precious.(225words)
BR 1-12: Dinosaur Who Lost His ROAR
I read "Dinosaur Who Lost His ROAR". I introduce this story.Main character is Sid and he is red dinosaur. He liked to surprised his friends by shouting. He surprised the friend who tried to gather the fish and dropped to the river.
One day, he can not shout and surprised his friends. So he was made a fool of friends. He took the medicine and went to bed rest. After a few days he is fine.
So he looked for his friends to surprised them. However, his friend was not searching anywhere. He noticed that his friends were caught. And his friend was not searching for where. He shout. So the dinosaur escaped. His friends thank to him.
I think that this story is very interesting. (126words)
BR 1-11: Nicky Upstairs and down
I read “Nicky Upstairs and Down” . this story is very interesting and Nicky is very cute. I introduce this story.
Nicky is small cat. Nicky often plays hide-and-seek with mother. She hides herself in downstairs without fail. Mother pretends the hiding of Nicky in downstairs though she dares to understand not to understand.
One day, Nicky was hidden in not downstairs but the shelf. The reason for Nicky is that it becomes tired of running. However, I worried very much because mother had not had Nicky in downstairs. There was no answer though mother wrote the name many times. Nicky noticed mother worry, returned to downstairs, and answered. Mother was really relieved.(113words)
Nicky is small cat. Nicky often plays hide-and-seek with mother. She hides herself in downstairs without fail. Mother pretends the hiding of Nicky in downstairs though she dares to understand not to understand.
One day, Nicky was hidden in not downstairs but the shelf. The reason for Nicky is that it becomes tired of running. However, I worried very much because mother had not had Nicky in downstairs. There was no answer though mother wrote the name many times. Nicky noticed mother worry, returned to downstairs, and answered. Mother was really relieved.(113words)
2009年7月13日月曜日
I had a good time★
I ate dinner with my club friends and seniors. We went to "COPEN GARDEN" . We chose the course of all-you-can-eat and all-you-can-drink. Sake and the dish were very delicious. And we talked for a long time. Especially , I liked pizza.
After the dinner, we met another club friends and seniors. We went to fiesta and did UFO catcher. We could get a lot of key holders.
We ate a lot of foods. Because I had eaten meal after a long time with the senior, I was glad. The senior paid a fare. Therefore, everyone said the reward to the senior.
I want to go again.(107words)
After the dinner, we met another club friends and seniors. We went to fiesta and did UFO catcher. We could get a lot of key holders.
We ate a lot of foods. Because I had eaten meal after a long time with the senior, I was glad. The senior paid a fare. Therefore, everyone said the reward to the senior.
I want to go again.(107words)
2009年7月8日水曜日
Portfolio for Writing III
Student ID:08109
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | For the host family | 2009.04.13 | 4 | 286 | 2 | 1 | 0 | 0 |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | For My host family | 2009.06.10 | 3 | 286 | 0 | 1 | 0 | 0 |
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | 2009.07.17 | 5 | 277 | 0 | 1 | 0 | 0 | |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | 5 | 277 | 0 | 1 | 0 | 0 | ||
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Lilo & Stitch | 5 | 231 | 0 | 1 | 0 | 0 | |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | 5 | 231 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 0 | ||
Totals | --- | --- | 27 | 1588 | 3 | 6 | 0 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | 2009.07.14 | 14 | good | |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | 2009.07.19 | 13 | good | |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | 2009.07.08 | 22 | good | |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | 2009.04.03 | 16 | good | |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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2.6. Additional reflections on comments
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
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3.0. Book Reviews
Nicky Upstairs and down3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | Christmas Carrol | 2009.05.03 |
| 0 |
BR 1-02 | THE SNOW QUEEN | 2009.06.01 | 126 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | Give us the Money. | 2009.26.10 | 220 | 0 |
BR 1-04 | MAKING HEADLINE | 2009.06.10 | 120 |
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BR 1-05 | FLYING HOME | 2009.07.16 |
| 0 |
BR 1-06 | The Little Red Hen | 2009.07.01 |
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BR 1-07 | CORDUROY | 2009.07.01 | 133 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | NEW | 2009.07.03 | 80 |
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BR 1-09 | ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM | 2009.07.05 | 124 |
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BR 1-10 | Romeo and Juliet | 2009.05.07 | 223 | 1 |
BR 1-11 | 2009.07.17 |
| 0 | |
BR 1-12 |
| 2009.07.17 |
| 0 |
--- | --- | Totals: |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | Y | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | Y | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | Y | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | Y | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | Y | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| Y | |
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | Y | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | Y | |
| N | |
| --- | --- |
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | N | |
| --- | --- |
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | N | |
| --- | --- |
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| --- | --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
...I enhance my blogs. I stock a lot of pictures.
...I enhance writing force. Because of this blog.
...I enhance the blog's layout.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
...I glad to have my blog. I want to go no writing my blog.
...I like this class because I like tracher
I like to watch my friends Blog.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
...My blog uses a lot of pictures. So they should use pictures more.
...They should write more.
...They should make more cute.
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
2009年7月7日火曜日
BR 1-10: Romeo and Juliet
I read “Romeo and Juliet”. I introduce.
Romeo and Juliet are enemy's lineages. However, Romeo of a certain party is covered of the mask and it sneaks in. Romeo glancing falls in love with Juliet at the party. Juliet also glancing sees Romio and it comes to like it. However, do not let two people be connected. Romeo is a free soldier though Juliet is a princess. Two people differ in social standing. Therefore, he had come to her to meet stealing the public notice.
However, the marriage proposal is recommended to Juliet. Father began to say, "If the marriage proposal was not done, banish it" though she wanted never to do the marriage proposal. Romio has been killed as one person revenge of the friend. Therefore, he was banished. Juliet wanted to marry Romeo somehow or other. Therefore, it cooperated in the father in the church. However, the strategy failed. The strategy fails and Romio and Juliet have committed suicide.
Juliet wanted to marry Romeo somehow or other. Therefore, it cooperated in the father in the church. However, the strategy failed. The strategy fails and Romio and Juliet have committed suicide.
I thought that there were a lot of tragedies of a shakespearian work. Romeo and Juliet is an especially sad story. I wanted you for Romeo and Juliet to be connected.
(223words)
Romeo and Juliet are enemy's lineages. However, Romeo of a certain party is covered of the mask and it sneaks in. Romeo glancing falls in love with Juliet at the party. Juliet also glancing sees Romio and it comes to like it. However, do not let two people be connected. Romeo is a free soldier though Juliet is a princess. Two people differ in social standing. Therefore, he had come to her to meet stealing the public notice.
However, the marriage proposal is recommended to Juliet. Father began to say, "If the marriage proposal was not done, banish it" though she wanted never to do the marriage proposal. Romio has been killed as one person revenge of the friend. Therefore, he was banished. Juliet wanted to marry Romeo somehow or other. Therefore, it cooperated in the father in the church. However, the strategy failed. The strategy fails and Romio and Juliet have committed suicide.
Juliet wanted to marry Romeo somehow or other. Therefore, it cooperated in the father in the church. However, the strategy failed. The strategy fails and Romio and Juliet have committed suicide.
I thought that there were a lot of tragedies of a shakespearian work. Romeo and Juliet is an especially sad story. I wanted you for Romeo and Juliet to be connected.
(223words)
2009年7月5日日曜日
BR 1-9 ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM
I read “ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM”. I introduce this story.
Main character is Arthur. Arthur visited the museum as social study. Because he had wanted to borrow the porcelain, the place in the rest room was asked to his homeroom teacher. The teacher said, "Turn the corner there left". However, it has turned the corner left him.
The room is a room where Indian's doll is decorated. Therefore, he shouted, "Help" in surprise. However, it laughed at him knowing to his classmate Indian's room there because it saw.
He has entered a different make a mistake again room. However, he knew the life of the person of a culture different by the favor that entered a different room, and was able to study.(124words)
Main character is Arthur. Arthur visited the museum as social study. Because he had wanted to borrow the porcelain, the place in the rest room was asked to his homeroom teacher. The teacher said, "Turn the corner there left". However, it has turned the corner left him.
The room is a room where Indian's doll is decorated. Therefore, he shouted, "Help" in surprise. However, it laughed at him knowing to his classmate Indian's room there because it saw.
He has entered a different make a mistake again room. However, he knew the life of the person of a culture different by the favor that entered a different room, and was able to study.(124words)
2009年7月3日金曜日
Kato Miriya
I introduce my favorite singer. Her name is Kato Miriya. She is 21years old.
She is very small and cute. I became her fan last year. I had not interested in her but, I knew her. I was recommended her songs by my friends.
Her song makes the person who listened happy. When I heard her songs, I sympathized texts. There are a lot of disappointed love songs of her song. Therefore, she is popular among a young woman. I also listened to her song when sad time and disappointed in love.
I almost cried because I was impressed when listening to the singing voice of her life. Her singing voice had power though her body was delicate and small. Hereafter, I want to keep assisting in her. (128words)
★ARASHI★
I like Arashi very much. Especially, Masaki Aiba is loved. He always is good the style, and always always lovely with a smile. I like such man.
Arashi became recent and it came going out of popularity. A lot of CD that they put out is sure to sell. My younger sister loves arashi. Arashi is very interesting. Therefore, arashi is popular.
I will go to the concert of arashi with the friend in September. Recently, because the popularity of arashi has come out, the ticket might not be able to be reserved. However, I want to reserve the ticket, and to go to the concert of arashi absolutely. Arashi wants to form, to attend a concert because it is the tenth anniversary, and to see arashi of the life.
Hereafter, I will keep assisting in arashi.(137words)
BR 1-8: NEW
I read “ARTHUR NEW KID”. I introduce this story.
A transfer student came to a certain school. The student is Norbert. He was different from other students in something. Therefore he was made fun of by other students. He felt it in loneliness. But a certain thing was an opportunity, and he became a popular person of a class. He sent pleasant school life.
I thought that it was good that this boy became the popular person of the class.
(80words)
A transfer student came to a certain school. The student is Norbert. He was different from other students in something. Therefore he was made fun of by other students. He felt it in loneliness. But a certain thing was an opportunity, and he became a popular person of a class. He sent pleasant school life.
I thought that it was good that this boy became the popular person of the class.
(80words)
BR 1-7: CORDUROY
I read “CORDUROY”. It is very interesting. I introduce this story.
CORDUROY is a name of bear's stuffed animal. LISA is an owner of CORDUROY. Lisa noticed the cookie of the bakery was different from always one day. Therefore, she decided to write a letter in the bakery. However, she gave up writing on the way. Therefore, CORDUROY wrote a letter instead of her, and sent a letter to to the post. When she went to the bakery, she was said the reward by the storekeeper. And, she got bread as a reward.
Afterwards, CORDUROY wrote a letter instead of her every time she tried to write a letter.
I thought that I read this book and CORDUROY was very lovely. Especially, the cut-in illustration is lovely. I want such a stuffed animal. (133words)
2009年7月2日木曜日
Mr. Brain
I see this drama every week. Even if this drama is seen on the way, I can understand the content because this drama is one story conclusion. The performer of this drama is very gorgeous. For instance, Kimura Takuya, Ayase Haruka, and Mizusima hiro, etc. perform. In addition, Nakama Yukie and Sato Takeru, etc. appeared as a guest.
In this drama, the murder is solved based on the brain science. Therefore, I am studied every time this drama is seen. They do the psychological analysis and look for the criminal. This drama faces the climax soon. Therefore, I will see to the last minute neatly though it is lonely that I end this drama. It is not too late now and see the person who has not seen this drama by all means, please. (134words)
Essay 1-03b Lilo & Stitch
I like Disny. Especially, I like lilo &Stitch . When I was a junior high school student, I saw this movie for the first time. I was made to think a lot by seeing Lilo & Stitch.
First, I thought about family. Lilo lost parents and was raised by the elder sister. Therefore, she kept Stitch as a pet. He did not know this year when it raged by the monster. However, Lilo teaches variety for Stitch. He comes to understand person's mind gradually. This is evidence that she considers Stitch to be a true family.
Lilo was a family, and thought Stitch to be the best best friend. Stitch is also the same. Therefore, it went to help at the risk of one's life when she was kidnapped.
I thought that the best friend was a very important person. It is existence that can be relied on best when I am embarrassed. I have been helped many times before by the best friend. Therefore, when the best friend is embarrassed, I wanting help best. I want to value the best friend in the future, and want to associate all my life.
I want to value the family. I wish to express my gratitude especially in parents for having brought me up here. I cannot pass on the word of gratitude because I am shameful, and either wants to tell the gratitude.(231words)
2009年7月1日水曜日
BR 1-6: The Little Red Hen
I read The Little Red Hen . It is very interesting. I introduce this story.
There were three friends in the little red hen. He has cat, duck, and rat's friends. He finds the wheat seed in the field one day. He thought that he grew wheat and made bread. Therefore, he asks when he wants you to help to grow wheat to the friend. However, he was refused by everyone. Afterwards, the friend kept refusing his request. Therefore, he grew wheat alone. Wheat has grown up well thanks to him.
When autumn came, he made bread reaping wheat. Bread finished very delicious. However, it was said to him that the friend wanted to eat bread. However, he subdued bread alone.
I did not think to do the desire that may do easiness. And, I thought that the effort returned without fail.(141words)
2009年6月30日火曜日
Vacation
I will go Hawaii with my friends in this vacation. We would to abroad as oversaes training. But we can not go there becase of pig ful. I worked very hard part time job to go America. I was very sad. So I will go Hawaii with my friends. Especially I want to go duty-free shop. I want COACH's bag. I can buy low cost it in duty-free shop. On other hands, I will study English harder. I have a lot of time to studying English in summer vacation. So I master a lot of wards and speak English smoothy.(103words)
Blog
I had never writen my blog in English until I enter KGU. I went slow to write my blog. I was very tiresome to write my blog in English. If I did not write my blog in English, I can not get a credit. So I started to write my blog in English. I became feeling exciting it. Recently I am writing my blog n English every day. I like to carry my picture in my blog. So I often carry my pictures in my blog. I want to go on writing my blog.(94words)
Cellphone
I have used to my cellphone since I am 15 years old. Al of my family used to au. Recently, cellphones became important contact means. If there were no cellphone, it is dificult for us to contact. I do not have the day that not using it. And we get a lot of information from it. For example, weather forecast, fortunetelling or train's shedule. Now we can watch TV anywhere. Celphone is very usefull but, we must not depend on it. If we will depond it, we can not become doing by myself.(94words)
computer
I rarely computer when I was hight school student. But I have used electronic dictionary. I could remember place of key. But I can not type now. And I am not used to use computers along time. So if I used computers long time, I am tired my eyes. I do not use to computer. When I became a member of society, I must to use it. So I try to used to use computers while student. My do my best.(81words)
movie
My favorit movie is "Scissors Hands". It is foreign film. When I was 12 years old, I watched it first. It is pure love story. When I watched it, I could not stop crying. Main character is Zyony Depp. He carried out various parts. Movies performed him always hit.
Scissors Hands is debut work of him.
Main charactor is very kind but his hands is scissor. So he was dealt with monster. Heroin loves him but, they did not bound. This story is unhappy.(84words)
Scissors Hands is debut work of him.
Main charactor is very kind but his hands is scissor. So he was dealt with monster. Heroin loves him but, they did not bound. This story is unhappy.(84words)
2009年6月26日金曜日
YOUTH HOSTEL(☆+^�^)⌒♪+'
I hang up Youth Hostel members on Monday. We went to Ueki to meet our senior. Our senior worked in Macdald. We waited our senior but, she did not hung up together. She seemed to be very tired.
We returned Kumamoto city. So we watched horrible DVD. I did not want to watch it. We had to return by car in the middle of the night. But I was watched it. It was very horrible. It almost cried when the senior threatened me.
We went out of the house at two o'clock of the middle of the night. I had a good time very much.(105words)
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