Gokusen

I like “Gokusenn” so I want to watch the movie.
It started when I was 13 years old. I watched it every Wednesday. I look forward to this drama. I introduce this story.

Main character is Yamaguchi Kumiko. She is high school teacher. But she is keeping a secret. In fact, Her lineage is gangster. If this truth came out school, she would have to leave school. She will take charge of the class to which the defect is collected. Students did not try to hear her story. On the contrary, they tried to harm her. She was annoyed by students who did not hear saying completely. She kept believing students so that be said badly from surroundings by them. As for students, the effect began to believe her because they were. I think to give up this drama seeing.(140words)

Essay 1-02b University life

I enjoy in my university life. I commute from Tamana everyday. It is very hard but, it makes me slender. I became thin about 5 kilogram. I am very happy but, my mother is worry me. So my mother makes me lunchbox everyday. I eat it in the bakery.

I belong to a Youth Hostel club. It is traveling club. There are about 60 people in my club. I went to Fukuoka, Kagosima and Saga with club members. I had a good time. Club members are friendship. We often hung out.

I study English very hard everyday in library. I like library very much and library is very comfortable. This library is so quiet. So I often study English or write reports in the library.

I like bakery. The bakery’ bread is very low cost and very delicious. There are a lot of kinds of breads. Especially I like “choch bread”. It is very sweet and aromatic. It is 140 yen. So it is enexpensive for me to buy.

I go to KGU by train and bus. The train and bus takes about 60 minutes. I thought that it is very hard for me. However, I am accustomed to use the train and bus. But I envious of people who living Kumamoto city. Because they need not use train or bus. I want to live Kumamoto city.
I entered KGU to study particular English. I dislike English so I wanted to overcome. Especially, I was not good at writing. But I can overcome it because I take writing class every Wednesday. I must writing blog 10000words. So I write my blog every day. I get writing force.(277words)

Holly Potter(*●´3｀）

I watched “ Holly Potter” with my friend. We went to Kumamoto Kurea by my friends driving. I looked fowared to watching “Holly Potter”. We bought the ticket and did UFO catcher. I could get a cute key holder. I could get Rirakkuma’s suffed animal so, I feel very regrettable.

We bought a hamburger and entered the movie theater. It is very difficult for me to understand this story. I could not understand this story because I had not read “Holly Potter”. I thought that the story is very interesting. the story’s ending is very sad. So I cried. I thought that “ You must be kidding”. I feel very sad

I try to read this book. (117words)

Essay 1-02a University life

I enjoy in my university life. I commute from Tamana everyday. It is very hard but, it makes me slender. I became thin about 5 kilogram. I am very happy but, my mother is worry me. So my mother makes me lunchbox everyday. I eat it in the bakery.

I belong to a Youth Hostel club. It is traveling club. There are about 60 people in my club. I went to Fukuoka, Kagosima and Saga with club members. I had a good time. Club members are friendship. We often hung out.

I study English very hard everyday in library. I like library very much and library is very comfortable. This library is so quiet. So I often study English or write reports in the library.

I like bakery. The bakery’ bread is very low cost and very delicious. There are a lot of kinds of breads. Especially I like “choch bread”. It is very sweet and aromatic. It is 140 yen. So it is enexpensive for me to buy.

I go to KGU by train and bus. The train and bus takes about 60 minutes. I thought that it is very hard for me. However, I am accustomed to use the train and bus. But I envious of people who living Kumamoto city. Because they need not use train or bus. I want to live Kumamoto city.
I entered KGU to study particular English. I dislike English so I wanted to overcome. Especially, I was not good at writing. But I can overcome it because I take writing class every Wednesday. I must writing blog 10000words. So I write my blog every day. I get writing force.(277words)

Essay 1-03b: Lilo and Stitch

I like Disney. Especially, I like lilo &Stitch . When I was a junior high school student, I saw this movie for the first time. I was made to think a lot by seeing Lilo & Stitch.

First, I thought about family. Lilo lost parents and was raised by the elder sister. Therefore, she kept Stitch as a pet. He did not know this year when it raged by the monster. However, Lilo teaches variety for Stitch. He comes to understand person's mind gradually. This is evidence that she considers Stitch to be a true family.

Lilo was a family, and thought Stitch to be the best best friend. Stitch is also the same. Therefore, it went to help at the risk of one's life when she was kidnapped.

I thought that the best friend was a very important person. It is existence that can be relied on best when I am embarrassed. I have been helped many times before by the best friend. Therefore, when the best friend is embarrassed, I wanting help best. I want to value the best friend in the future, and want to associate all my life.

I want to value the family. I wish to express my gratitude especially in parents for having brought me up here. I cannot pass on the word of gratitude because I am shameful, and either wants to tell the gratitude.(231words)

BR 1-13: The Goose that laid the Golden Eggs

I read " The Goose that laid the Golden Eggs". I introduce this story.

Tom lived in a small cottage. His wife is Elena. They were very poor but they were happy. They had a goat, hens and geese. He put eggs and go to the village to sell it every morning.

One day, he found strange egg. The egg is gold. The husband and wife were very surprised. They had never seen it. He brought the goldsmith in the village. The goldsmith was amazed too. The gold smith wanted it. So He exchanged the egg for money. So he bought a new dress for his wife. However, she was not happy. She wanted a lot of money. Because he bought it, he had no money.

He found another golden egg next morning. He exchanged the egg for money and bought new clothes for himself. They built a new big house. They became rich.

They became greedy. They wanted golden eggs more. They thought of killing the goose and remove a lot of golden eggs. So they killed the goose. But there were not a golden eggs. So they became so pool.

I think that this story is very cruel story. Because they killed the goose, they would return pool life. The punishment would be hit. We must not kill animals and bring up precious.(225words)

BR 1-12: Dinosaur Who Lost His ROAR

I read "Dinosaur Who Lost His ROAR". I introduce this story.

Main character is Sid and he is red dinosaur. He liked to surprised his friends by shouting. He surprised the friend who tried to gather the fish and dropped to the river.

One day, he can not shout and surprised his friends. So he was made a fool of friends. He took the medicine and went to bed rest. After a few days he is fine.

So he looked for his friends to surprised them. However, his friend was not searching anywhere. He noticed that his friends were caught. And his friend was not searching for where. He shout. So the dinosaur escaped. His friends thank to him.

I think that this story is very interesting. (126words)

BR 1-11: Nicky Upstairs and down

I read “Nicky Upstairs and Down” . this story is very interesting and Nicky is very cute. I introduce this story.

Nicky is small cat. Nicky often plays hide-and-seek with mother. She hides herself in downstairs without fail. Mother pretends the hiding of Nicky in downstairs though she dares to understand not to understand.

One day, Nicky was hidden in not downstairs but the shelf. The reason for Nicky is that it becomes tired of running. However, I worried very much because mother had not had Nicky in downstairs. There was no answer though mother wrote the name many times. Nicky noticed mother worry, returned to downstairs, and answered. Mother was really relieved.(113words)

I had a good time★

I ate dinner with my club friends and seniors. We went to "COPEN GARDEN" . We chose the course of all-you-can-eat and all-you-can-drink. Sake and the dish were very delicious. And we talked for a long time. Especially , I liked pizza.

After the dinner, we met another club friends and seniors. We went to fiesta and did UFO catcher. We could get a lot of key holders.

We ate a lot of foods. Because I had eaten meal after a long time with the senior, I was glad. The senior paid a fare. Therefore, everyone said the reward to the senior.
I want to go again.(107words)

Portfolio for Writing III

Student ID:08109

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	For the host family	2009.04.13	4	286	2	1	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)	For My host family	2009.06.10	3	286	0	1	0	0
(1-01c)
1-02a (2009.06.01)	Essay 1-02a University life	2009.07.17	5	277	0	1	0	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	Essay 1-02b University life		5	277	0	1	0	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	Lilo & Stitch		5	231	0	1	0	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Essay 1-03b: Lilo and Stitch		5	231	1	1	0	0
Totals	---	---	27	1588	3	6	0	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Kana and I went to ...	2009.07.14	14	good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	6 and 7	2009.07.19	13	good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Romeo and Juliet	2009.07.08	22	good
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	For the host family	2009.04.03	16	good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• ...

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]

• ....

3.0. Book Reviews

Nicky Upstairs and down

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	Christmas Carrol	2009.05.03	134	0
BR 1-02	THE SNOW QUEEN	2009.06.01	126	0
BR 1-03	Give us the Money.	2009.26.10	220	0
BR 1-04	MAKING HEADLINE	2009.06.10	120	0
BR 1-05	FLYING HOME	2009.07.16	119	0
BR 1-06	The Little Red Hen	2009.07.01	141	0
BR 1-07	CORDUROY	2009.07.01	133	0
BR 1-08	NEW	2009.07.03	80	0
BR 1-09	ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM	2009.07.05	124	0
BR 1-10	Romeo and Juliet	2009.05.07	223	1
BR 1-11	Nicky Upstairs and down	2009.07.17	126	0
BR 1-12	Dinosaur Who Lost His ROAR	2009.07.17	113	0
---	---	Totals:

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	Y
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	Y
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	Y
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	Y
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	Y
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	Y
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	Y
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	Y
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	Y
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	Y
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	Y
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	Y
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. brainstorming (1) essay prep. (2) Essays (5) free writing (1) list (1) movies (2) my hobby (1) outlines (1)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	Y
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		N
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? __20_ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		N
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		N
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? _0__ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...I enhance my blogs. I stock a lot of pictures.

2. ...I enhance writing force. Because of this blog.

3. ...I enhance the blog's layout.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...I glad to have my blog. I want to go no writing my blog.

• ...I like this class because I like tracher 

  I like to watch my friends Blog.

  
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...My blog uses a lot of pictures. So they should use pictures more.

• ...They should write more.

• ...They should make more cute.

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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BR 1-10: Romeo and Juliet

I read “Romeo and Juliet”. I introduce.

Romeo and Juliet are enemy's lineages. However, Romeo of a certain party is covered of the mask and it sneaks in. Romeo glancing falls in love with Juliet at the party. Juliet also glancing sees Romio and it comes to like it. However, do not let two people be connected. Romeo is a free soldier though Juliet is a princess. Two people differ in social standing. Therefore, he had come to her to meet stealing the public notice.

However, the marriage proposal is recommended to Juliet. Father began to say, "If the marriage proposal was not done, banish it" though she wanted never to do the marriage proposal. Romio has been killed as one person revenge of the friend. Therefore, he was banished. Juliet wanted to marry Romeo somehow or other. Therefore, it cooperated in the father in the church. However, the strategy failed. The strategy fails and Romio and Juliet have committed suicide.
Juliet wanted to marry Romeo somehow or other. Therefore, it cooperated in the father in the church. However, the strategy failed. The strategy fails and Romio and Juliet have committed suicide.

I thought that there were a lot of tragedies of a shakespearian work. Romeo and Juliet is an especially sad story. I wanted you for Romeo and Juliet to be connected.
(223words)

BR 1-9 ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM

I read “ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM”. I introduce this story.

Main character is Arthur. Arthur visited the museum as social study. Because he had wanted to borrow the porcelain, the place in the rest room was asked to his homeroom teacher. The teacher said, "Turn the corner there left". However, it has turned the corner left him.

The room is a room where Indian's doll is decorated. Therefore, he shouted, "Help" in surprise. However, it laughed at him knowing to his classmate Indian's room there because it saw.

He has entered a different make a mistake again room. However, he knew the life of the person of a culture different by the favor that entered a different room, and was able to study.(124words)

Kato Miriya

I introduce my favorite singer. Her name is Kato Miriya. She is 21years old.
She is very small and cute. I became her fan last year. I had not interested in her but, I knew her. I was recommended her songs by my friends.

Her song makes the person who listened happy. When I heard her songs, I sympathized　texts. There are a lot of disappointed love songs of her song. Therefore, she is popular among a young woman. I also listened to her song when sad time and disappointed in love.

I almost cried because I was impressed when listening to the singing voice of her life. Her singing voice had power though her body was delicate and small. Hereafter, I want to keep assisting in her. (128words)

★ARASHI★

I like Arashi very much. Especially, Masaki Aiba is loved. He always is good the style, and always always lovely with a smile. I like such man.

Arashi became recent and it came going out of popularity. A lot of CD that they put out is sure to sell. My younger sister loves arashi. Arashi is very interesting. Therefore, arashi is popular.

I will go to the concert of arashi with the friend in September. Recently, because the popularity of arashi has come out, the ticket might not be able to be reserved. However, I want to reserve the ticket, and to go to the concert of arashi absolutely. Arashi wants to form, to attend a concert because it is the tenth anniversary, and to see arashi of the life.

Hereafter, I will keep assisting in arashi.(137words)

BR 1-8: NEW

I read “ARTHUR NEW KID”. I introduce this story.

A transfer student came to a certain school. The student is Norbert. He was different from other students in something. Therefore he was made fun of by other students. He felt it in loneliness. But a certain thing was an opportunity, and he became a popular person of a class. He sent pleasant school life.

I thought that it was good that this boy became the popular person of the class.
(80words)

BR 1-7: CORDUROY

I read “CORDUROY”. It is very interesting. I introduce this story.

CORDUROY is a name of bear's stuffed animal. LISA is an owner of CORDUROY. Lisa noticed the cookie of the bakery was different from always one day. Therefore, she decided to write a letter in the bakery. However, she gave up writing on the way. Therefore, CORDUROY wrote a letter instead of her, and sent a letter to to the post. When she went to the bakery, she was said the reward by the storekeeper. And, she got bread as a reward.

Afterwards, CORDUROY wrote a letter instead of her every time she tried to write a letter.

I thought that I read this book and CORDUROY was very lovely. Especially, the cut-in illustration is lovely. I want such a stuffed animal. (133words)

Mr. Brain

I see this drama every week. Even if this drama is seen on the way, I can understand the content because this drama is one story conclusion. The performer of this drama is very gorgeous. For instance, Kimura Takuya, Ayase Haruka, and Mizusima hiro, etc. perform. In addition, Nakama Yukie and Sato Takeru, etc. appeared as a guest.

In this drama, the murder is solved based on the brain science. Therefore, I am studied every time this drama is seen. They do the psychological analysis and look for the criminal. This drama faces the climax soon. Therefore, I will see to the last minute neatly though it is lonely that I end this drama. It is not too late now and see the person who has not seen this drama by all means, please. (134words)

Essay 1-03b Lilo & Stitch

I like Disny. Especially, I like lilo &Stitch . When I was a junior high school student, I saw this movie for the first time. I was made to think a lot by seeing Lilo & Stitch.

First, I thought about family. Lilo lost parents and was raised by the elder sister. Therefore, she kept Stitch as a pet. He did not know this year when it raged by the monster. However, Lilo teaches variety for Stitch. He comes to understand person's mind gradually. This is evidence that she considers Stitch to be a true family.

Lilo was a family, and thought Stitch to be the best best friend. Stitch is also the same. Therefore, it went to help at the risk of one's life when she was kidnapped.

I thought that the best friend was a very important person. It is existence that can be relied on best when I am embarrassed. I have been helped many times before by the best friend. Therefore, when the best friend is embarrassed, I wanting help best. I want to value the best friend in the future, and want to associate all my life.

I want to value the family. I wish to express my gratitude especially in parents for having brought me up here. I cannot pass on the word of gratitude because I am shameful, and either wants to tell the gratitude.(231words)

BR 1-6: The Little Red Hen

I read The Little Red Hen . It is very interesting. I introduce this story.

 

There were three friends in the little red hen. He has cat, duck, and rat's friends. He finds the wheat seed in the field one day. He thought that he grew wheat and made bread. Therefore, he asks when he wants you to help to grow wheat to the friend. However, he was refused by everyone. Afterwards, the friend kept refusing his request. Therefore, he grew wheat alone. Wheat has grown up well thanks to him.

 

When autumn came, he made bread reaping wheat. Bread finished very delicious. However, it was said to him that the friend wanted to eat bread. However, he subdued bread alone.

 

I did not think to do the desire that may do easiness. And, I thought that the effort returned without fail.(141words)