BR 1-13: The Goose that laid the Golden Eggs

I read " The Goose that laid the Golden Eggs". I introduce this story.

Tom lived in a small cottage. His wife is Elena. They were very poor but they were happy. They had a goat, hens and geese. He put eggs and go to the village to sell it every morning.

One day, he found strange egg. The egg is gold. The husband and wife were very surprised. They had never seen it. He brought the goldsmith in the village. The goldsmith was amazed too. The gold smith wanted it. So He exchanged the egg for money. So he bought a new dress for his wife. However, she was not happy. She wanted a lot of money. Because he bought it, he had no money.

He found another golden egg next morning. He exchanged the egg for money and bought new clothes for himself. They built a new big house. They became rich.

They became greedy. They wanted golden eggs more. They thought of killing the goose and remove a lot of golden eggs. So they killed the goose. But there were not a golden eggs. So they became so pool.

I think that this story is very cruel story. Because they killed the goose, they would return pool life. The punishment would be hit. We must not kill animals and bring up precious.(225words)

BR 1-12: Dinosaur Who Lost His ROAR

I read "Dinosaur Who Lost His ROAR". I introduce this story.

Main character is Sid and he is red dinosaur. He liked to surprised his friends by shouting. He surprised the friend who tried to gather the fish and dropped to the river.

One day, he can not shout and surprised his friends. So he was made a fool of friends. He took the medicine and went to bed rest. After a few days he is fine.

So he looked for his friends to surprised them. However, his friend was not searching anywhere. He noticed that his friends were caught. And his friend was not searching for where. He shout. So the dinosaur escaped. His friends thank to him.

I think that this story is very interesting. (126words)

BR 1-11: Nicky Upstairs and down

I read “Nicky Upstairs and Down” . this story is very interesting and Nicky is very cute. I introduce this story.

Nicky is small cat. Nicky often plays hide-and-seek with mother. She hides herself in downstairs without fail. Mother pretends the hiding of Nicky in downstairs though she dares to understand not to understand.

One day, Nicky was hidden in not downstairs but the shelf. The reason for Nicky is that it becomes tired of running. However, I worried very much because mother had not had Nicky in downstairs. There was no answer though mother wrote the name many times. Nicky noticed mother worry, returned to downstairs, and answered. Mother was really relieved.(113words)

I had a good time★

I ate dinner with my club friends and seniors. We went to "COPEN GARDEN" . We chose the course of all-you-can-eat and all-you-can-drink. Sake and the dish were very delicious. And we talked for a long time. Especially , I liked pizza.

After the dinner, we met another club friends and seniors. We went to fiesta and did UFO catcher. We could get a lot of key holders.

We ate a lot of foods. Because I had eaten meal after a long time with the senior, I was glad. The senior paid a fare. Therefore, everyone said the reward to the senior.
I want to go again.(107words)

Portfolio for Writing III

Student ID:08109

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	For the host family	2009.04.13	4	286	2	1	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)	For My host family	2009.06.10	3	286	0	1	0	0
(1-01c)
1-02a (2009.06.01)	Essay 1-02a University life	2009.07.17	5	277	0	1	0	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	Essay 1-02b University life		5	277	0	1	0	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	Lilo & Stitch		5	231	0	1	0	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Essay 1-03b: Lilo and Stitch		5	231	1	1	0	0
Totals	---	---	27	1588	3	6	0	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Kana and I went to ...	2009.07.14	14	good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	6 and 7	2009.07.19	13	good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Romeo and Juliet	2009.07.08	22	good
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	For the host family	2009.04.03	16	good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• ...

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]

• ....

3.0. Book Reviews

Nicky Upstairs and down

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	Christmas Carrol	2009.05.03	134	0
BR 1-02	THE SNOW QUEEN	2009.06.01	126	0
BR 1-03	Give us the Money.	2009.26.10	220	0
BR 1-04	MAKING HEADLINE	2009.06.10	120	0
BR 1-05	FLYING HOME	2009.07.16	119	0
BR 1-06	The Little Red Hen	2009.07.01	141	0
BR 1-07	CORDUROY	2009.07.01	133	0
BR 1-08	NEW	2009.07.03	80	0
BR 1-09	ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM	2009.07.05	124	0
BR 1-10	Romeo and Juliet	2009.05.07	223	1
BR 1-11	Nicky Upstairs and down	2009.07.17	126	0
BR 1-12	Dinosaur Who Lost His ROAR	2009.07.17	113	0
---	---	Totals:

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	Y
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	Y
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	Y
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	Y
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	Y
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	Y
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	Y
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	Y
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	Y
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	Y
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	Y
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	Y
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. brainstorming (1) essay prep. (2) Essays (5) free writing (1) list (1) movies (2) my hobby (1) outlines (1)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	Y
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		N
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? __20_ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		N
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		N
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? _0__ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...I enhance my blogs. I stock a lot of pictures.

2. ...I enhance writing force. Because of this blog.

3. ...I enhance the blog's layout.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...I glad to have my blog. I want to go no writing my blog.

• ...I like this class because I like tracher 

  I like to watch my friends Blog.

  
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...My blog uses a lot of pictures. So they should use pictures more.

• ...They should write more.

• ...They should make more cute.

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).

BR 1-10: Romeo and Juliet

I read “Romeo and Juliet”. I introduce.

Romeo and Juliet are enemy's lineages. However, Romeo of a certain party is covered of the mask and it sneaks in. Romeo glancing falls in love with Juliet at the party. Juliet also glancing sees Romio and it comes to like it. However, do not let two people be connected. Romeo is a free soldier though Juliet is a princess. Two people differ in social standing. Therefore, he had come to her to meet stealing the public notice.

However, the marriage proposal is recommended to Juliet. Father began to say, "If the marriage proposal was not done, banish it" though she wanted never to do the marriage proposal. Romio has been killed as one person revenge of the friend. Therefore, he was banished. Juliet wanted to marry Romeo somehow or other. Therefore, it cooperated in the father in the church. However, the strategy failed. The strategy fails and Romio and Juliet have committed suicide.
Juliet wanted to marry Romeo somehow or other. Therefore, it cooperated in the father in the church. However, the strategy failed. The strategy fails and Romio and Juliet have committed suicide.

I thought that there were a lot of tragedies of a shakespearian work. Romeo and Juliet is an especially sad story. I wanted you for Romeo and Juliet to be connected.
(223words)

BR 1-9 ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM

I read “ARTHUR LOST in the MUSEUM”. I introduce this story.

Main character is Arthur. Arthur visited the museum as social study. Because he had wanted to borrow the porcelain, the place in the rest room was asked to his homeroom teacher. The teacher said, "Turn the corner there left". However, it has turned the corner left him.

The room is a room where Indian's doll is decorated. Therefore, he shouted, "Help" in surprise. However, it laughed at him knowing to his classmate Indian's room there because it saw.

He has entered a different make a mistake again room. However, he knew the life of the person of a culture different by the favor that entered a different room, and was able to study.(124words)